Fix Her Up: A Novel: 1 (Hot and Hammered, 1)

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there are already so many little things that don't sit right w/ me in this book, and after that first sex scene. I also have a torn rotator cuff, except I'm not a professional athlete and have been denied treatment or surgery to dull the pain. For me to have enjoyed this, I think it would need a huge facelift in how the love interest treats the main character, the descriptions were written, and how childish the characters came off. But a chance encounter forces her to confront the truth: what happened to make Macy stop speaking to Elliot?

I don't think anything that seriously utters the phrase "concrete buttocks" should get more than 1 star. latest tackles the difficult subject of domestic violence with romantic tenderness and emotional heft. Even the thought of kissing her "virgin lips" and being the "first man to claim her mouth" had me cringing so hard, I think I have a kink in my back now. I had some trouble accepting that but I digress) but as the youngest in her family, all she wants is to be taken seriously.

of course, none of these are reason why she couldn't be a virgin, i just find it a bit unrealistic and it only seems to be an added feature to make her that "wholesome woman" travis can "deflower". I honestly think if the author embraced that a bit more and made it more explicitly kinky, people might have had less issues.

The story plot itself continues after agreeing to a deal of being in a fake relationship for the sake of his career and hers as well. Which btw starts from discarding the over-sized sweaters and the rough old jeans she used to wear and start looking like a mature woman by wearing sexy dresses like a pencil skirt which shows the curves of her hips and her beautiful, freshly-waxed legs. And while there are bound to be hoards of readers who find virginal 23-year-old Georgie quirky, I’m not one of them. Known from their childhood, and been neighbors who live in Long Island (which is where I am from **squeals**), and grew apart because of their own differences. Lily marries Ryle hoping the good will outweigh the bad, and the mother-daughter dynamics evolve beautifully as Lily reflects on her childhood with fresh eyes.Despite the better option right in front of her, an unexpected complication forces Lily to cut ties with Atlas, confront Ryle, and try to end the cycle of abuse before it’s too late. I'm not here to offend anyone, my rating obviously tells I didn't like it so if you love this, good for you. It takes him a significant amount of time to realise his opinion should've been the same before she changed, but I still thought it was gross behaviour. These characters had so much growing to do, and if that was shown in a complete, complex, thought out, well developed arc, this could have been great, but alas, it's trash.